Revised Sketch

Whew! After many critiques this is what the final draft of my sketch looks like.

Update: This is supposed to be a DOUBLE-PAGED spread. I am so glad that I am making and learning from my mistakes now. Come back next weekend to see what I come up with.

I'm stuck!!!!

I hope you all are enjoying wonderful holidays! As for me...I AM FRUSTRATED! I am o.k. with "spot" illustrations but not so good with drawing landscapes. I cannot move on to the painting phase of my first landscape sketch for children until it has been critiqued.